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Discovery of the Self by ~Soryr:iconSoryr:



Heavy storms and striking rain.
I close my eyes against the pain.
I look to you, and see the same
Thing I saw as I asked in vain

For your help, support, a shoulder to cry on
Becoming a final bed to die on.
A turned back, a broken oath,
We’re off the track, you and me both.

So now I have to stand alone,
And face the future, still unknown
I’ll face the storms and I’ll endure
And fight that my mind can stay pure.

I look around and start to ask,
Why have I been given this task?
And I begin to wonder, even now
That alone, without your help, how
Can I hope to do what is asked of me?
Now that I have allies numbering…three.
©2007-2009 ~Soryr
:iconsoryr:

Author's Comments

Mind.
Body.
Heart.

What else does anyone have, really?

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:iconfrosen-roze:
me likes, tis powerful. and your good at the rhyming thing, i cant do that cos my poems are on like a three second whim :P

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if you have attempted alchemy by clapping your hands or drawing an array, then copy and paste this into your sign.

I asked the angels, I asked the faeries, I even consulted my tarot. We're together forever, I promise xxx
:iconsoryr:
Thank you =P i think mine lose something when i rhyme them...I'm not sure though...i always prefer mine when they happen really fast.
:iconfrosen-roze:
i like them all theyre all great :D

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if you have attempted alchemy by clapping your hands or drawing an array, then copy and paste this into your sign.

I asked the angels, I asked the faeries, I even consulted my tarot. We're together forever, I promise xxx
:iconmiss-venom:
-sigh-

it's wonderful.
you're wonderful.
:iconsoryr:
Awwh thank you =) its so good to hear that you actually like them.
:iconfrosen-roze:
course i do, this poem is really good, the rhymes give it a nice rhythm and the words that you use just make me wanna cry...

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if you have attempted alchemy by clapping your hands or drawing an array, then copy and paste this into your sign.

I asked the angels, I asked the faeries, I even consulted my tarot. We're together forever, I promise xxx
:iconsoryr:
Awwh :hug: I don't try to make you cry! Well...i guess i try to make the poems emotional, so i guess in a way i do, but I'm sorryyyyyy please don't cry :hug:
:iconfrosen-roze:
its ok! thats a good thing!!

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if you have attempted alchemy by clapping your hands or drawing an array, then copy and paste this into your sign.

I asked the angels, I asked the faeries, I even consulted my tarot. We're together forever, I promise xxx
:iconsoryr:
How is making you cry a good thing?! But yeah, i know what you mean. =P I just hate thinking about my friends crying...

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